One of these works better than the other.
You decide.
Corp-Speak
It is generally recommended that organizations consider whether there are opportunities for an assessment as to the functionality and effectiveness of their communications, and further, whether those may potentially be optimized through the use of enhanced efficiencies with respect to wording, style and organization.
Plain Language
You should always write in plain language so your readers know what you’re saying.
You don’t write in plain language because your readers are stupid.
You do it because they’re busy.
Plain language lets your readers understand your point the first time they read it.
Whether you’re describing highly complex technical content to experts or sharing simple information with the public, your readers all have the same need: to easily understand what they need to know, in as few words as possible.
We draft and edit all kinds of business documents so your information is clear, succinct, logical and accurate.
From multi-billion dollar RFP submissions, funding proposals and technical reports to public bulletins, blogs and web copy, we’ll help you deliver your message.